Anime-obsessed

Hello everyone,I need your help! As a rookie writer, I want your feedback and am open to criticism in order for me to grow. I've just finished the first chapter of my new novel,"Death Call", which is inspired by the anime Death Note. The story revolves around an app with the terrifying power to kill anyone simply by dialing their number. Please take a look whenever you have time and share your thoughts. I know I have a lot to learn and I'm new to this industry.
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um im getting kinda worried cause you havent updated in a dash in like a year or less

2 spots left on Bleeding Black. We're 10/12 :)

4 spots are filled up on Bleeding Black so far! Check it out if you want to join!

Bleeding Black has released !! If you're interested check it out. I hope to see some cool OCs :D

My new RP releases tomorrow! Anyone can join, it's called 'Bleeding Black' and there's a chance for a prize if your OC is a survivor! Hope to see you there :D

I'll be holding an RP very soon! The book should be up some time next week! This one will be for 6 days with a different plot from the first time. I'll be taking 10 people when the book comes up. Hope some of you are interested :)

RP people: So... unfortunately my computer was wiped because of a virus. Which means all of my progress on the game is currently gone... I might try again during summer, but for now it's gonna take a while lol. 
          
          But, I'm still thinking of doing another rp again in summer, so look out for that!

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