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Hello Ms. Plop! Forgive my intrusion. I send a message in "Ao Bing × Reader - Chapter 75." Thank you!♥︎
Hello author!
I came here just to let you know how much I love your "Opposing Energy". I have loved Aobing since the very beginning, and your fic´s making me fall for him harder. I can´t even express how much I'm into the character. I feel like I'm the real (Y/n), feel like Aobing's girl, Nezha's best friend. I even created some AI generated photos of Aobing and me. I made the character almost exactly looks like my real face. This is how much I'm into your fic. I wanna show you all the photos I made but so sad that I can't send you here. All you can see is my pp and bg photos.
Anyway...thank you so much for making my soul happy with your beautiful fic. Keep up the good work. I'm rooting for you!!!
Hello Ms. Plop! (AnimePlopPlop) This message is long so I hope you read well. Once you are done reading, you may reply at the end of my message. Thank you!♥︎
@OnnaHeartcore that’s all good. I already have most of my story figured out but thank you anyway for the ideas. I appreciate it though it’s different from the aspects in my story so maybe next time. I hope you understand:3
I just want your fans to know with a better understanding. I swear I'm not going to mess up into something cringy, right? TmT
Plus, Oaklynn Yan has two different versions. Nezha: The Opposing Energy (Your Story by shipping Aobing × Reader) & Butterflies UnderCover (My story)
Oaklynn has different sides but has similar personalities and struggles.
She was bullied but not too serious. Of course, her past relationship with the bullies showed bad mouthing at her when she was in high school and was recorded by the young bad influencers but was banded by the reporters. Don't worry, she has old friends in her past.
I am but I don't make a 'fanfic' chinese mythology book here on Wattpad. I'm good at making character names and ocs though.
Plus, I am active of typing comments below the conversation in seldom ways.
I am sorry for putting many of my ideas into your story :<. I didn't mean to push yourself hard to add more as it clashes with some aspects. I'll be gentle next time. And like I said, you can mix our ideas one by one from the start to end so that you can type a story properly, okay? I hope you're doing well. Oh! And your OC as [Y/N] is similar to my obscure character, Oaklynn Yan. That's why I put too much effort through my previous comments... T^T
Hi there! Dear•Star here! I am the author of "Butterflies UnderCover" (Book not release) and "Sarah and the Lalin's Curse" (A spin-off novel of "Butterflies UnderCover Season 2: Music Waves" | Discontinued) I am here to send this message: Dear Ms. Plop, "Your fanfic book is mesmerizing! It's okay to end the story or not. Just because we will wait for Nezha 3 in 5 years later, okay? Maybe you will make "[Title] Aobing × Reader" (Part 2). This book is good for me to read and willing for you to take some rest before typing again. You did your best to become a great author. And I hope you won't get emotional burnout. Just try not to push yourself, okay? I beg you. God bless!
I even named the oc in your fanfic story. Her name is Oaklynn Yan (quarter chinese), a college student but that is a different version of your OC; she's 21 years old, Ms. Plop. Yes, Oaklynn struggles social loneliness, neglected by her parents due to insecurity. Her parent didn't care for her when she grows up except her siblings. Her siblings care about her especially her elder brother name Solaris Yan (according to my version).
I understand she is the reincarnation of the "Golden Phonix" (Oaklynn is originally a Sanzuwu, a three legged crow– <and you have a right to describe them as "Sunbirds" (you mention) or "Suncrows">. You can search it on google about Sanzuwa and the Sun Goddess in chinese mythology. That could really help and build your own ideas.) because she is one of the ten crows and was shot by an arrow from the man name Hou Yi the legendary of the Lord Archer.
I know the Sun Goddess was introduced but she will reveal her name to Oaklynn later. The Sun Goddess' name is "Xi He" (or you can type Xihe if you want). Also, I have a permission for you. I know this isn't your idea but I want to share this with you as a disclaimer!♡ Pls. make this chapter longer .
Before the conflict in Chapter 71, once Haoyue healed Oaklynn, the four run to the Chentang Pass. Oaklynn tells Aobing that she knows why his father gets into wrath because of Haoyue and Haoran's parents or the three ladies (IDK which characters who caused him to lash out). And Haoyue added in a caught of the Dragon King's thoughts because he tried to cancel of the arrange marriage between Aobing and hers. That's why they don't want Aobing to love someone else and that's forbbiden. Oaklynn ask what should they do (Since Aobing got an idea, I'm sure he and Haoyue must help the Dragon King to confront Haoran and Haoyue's parents before the disaster arise).
Therefore, after the conflict, Oaklynn and Aobing had a datenight at the beach (IDK what kind of date is. Just make sure it's normal, comfortable, and bearable if you want so that the readers are in ease). She said to Aobing that she love dragons when she was toddler before mentioning that he's real is 3 as same as Nezha. She replies; in her perspective, she guesses that the looks early 20s due to his face, then adds him being 23 years old looks good on him. While Nezha on the other hand, he is six because of his height.
That was during they have a conversation alone and I understand why some dragons nor humans hate her including Haoyue and Haoran's parents because maybe they know she's going to sabotage or something bad, knewing that the Sun Goddess is controlling her. She asked is this why Haoran showed hatred towards her. Which causes herself to believe she is 'wanted,' looking at her hands in unsettled way. Even it's not true so Aobing told her that they might been misunderstood her and she's not the one who causes this. He's right that Oaklynn was not mistaken, causes to remind in her mind before she tells him I miss my home but she doesn't where to come back to see each other again even they are in a different timeline between the past and the present said in her disappointed tone. Oaklynn added her apology like she sadly apologized to Aobing earlier; she is sorry for being too insecure right infront of him and their friends. She is too scared to spill the whole truth before the disaster comes back but she was wrong. She also mention that Nezha was right, lies are dangerous and truth can be harsh with no patience at the end sometimes if she didn't say it properly (Once she talk about Nezha's being right, pls. put "Plus" after the end of the period "." because she's saying something more). Plus, she also told Aobing that he knew about her neglected parents she told but she didn't talk about her sibling whom she cared for her especially her older brother. Aobing questioned that she had a brother (Remember this is the version of mine. So, pls. don't mind this while you read, Ms. Plop).
Oaklynn nodded as she continue talking. She reveals she suffered social loneliness due to her parents' neglect by ignoring her talents: arts, singing and dancing because of her cold-like (calm) attitude with mysterious aura. It doesn't mean she's rude to them. Is this is why her parents were scared to tell her she's bad influence? :<. That's why it's hard for them to understand her and try to talk to her properly except her siblings. They truly care for her especially Solaris.
Oaklynn confirms she is the second child of the Yan family.
Oaklynn's expression turned frown and says if she wasn't there with them now, when her mom and dad thougnt she left, what will they think of her? Will they still care for her like her siblings if she comes back to her world? What will be their honest reaction instead of getting angry?
She eyes went teary, wipes her tears and says she miss her parents despite of ignoring them. Oaklynn hugged him back. She is now wondering if she will come back here once she has returned to her original home. She hopes if her parents and one of her siblings understand her explaination even it looks like fantasy. (But Solaris understood that she's living in a world of chinese mythology). she kisses Aobing's cheek before nervously smiles, Aobing gives a warm smile before they kiss softly each other.
Once they let go, she forgot to tell him something as she looks at her patterns. Aobing ask what's wrong, questioning if the Sun Goddess is controlling her. Oaklynn replies 'no'. She said there's a way she can talk to her instead of battling her. Aobing began to worry if she's going to hurt herself while being controlled by the Sun Goddess.
Oaklynn talks back calmly, she'll be fine and she doesn't need help from him and their friends to avoid conflict. The Sun Goddess don't trust everyone she dearly loved except her because she is her child once a sunbird. Oaklynn wants to know her name and her backstory, then she'll explain everything when she turns back to him and everyone. She offers a hand if that's a deal. Aobing is quite unsure, but she holds her hand as he is deeply protective to her before they give each other a hug, beginning to say "I love you" at the end.
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