~Sophia~

@SailorWJSN YESSS

@Alex68722 @SailorWJSN IM TAKIN OFF MAH HOOPS LETS TUMBLE

I'M ABOUT TO- GURL HOL MA NAILS

@SophiaGVaughan no that was good, thank you (:

@Nyomo-lynn Maybe give a bit more detail of the surroundings, the sounds the reader hears, what they smell, what they feel, everything . Add in even the smallest details . :) I hope that was helpful :3

@SophiaGVaughan thanks for telling me that. Is there anything else I could do to make my writing better? People don't comment constructive criticism on it, so I don't know how to improve faster than I am now.