-greedevils
hi!!! sorry to bother you, I would really appreciate if u could read my friends to lovers book “side effects”. hope u had/have a great day <3
https://www.wattpad.com/story/149211391?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create_story_details&wp_uname=-greedevils&wp_originator=3FpfuQszH5kFb%2B6PGL4yw5GGGmBumcyXHNYDu%2FqATkib5ZWVh92QrkUaQylbcBj8ZI4nQNA2xfaaZNLcGVE9nXy0wHRi%2FgCM3AqyC3JcylYCb2LQGhDWftr67AO0SXVB
Anleon123
@-greedevils okay so the start seems good and there’s nice description, however, a lot of the gramma isn’t right. Maybe just read through it, double checking the sentences that don’t sound right? Other than that, it’s really good. Xx