AnlythDalar

Heavily considering the possibility of going back to creepypasta for the rest of September and October up until Halloween. Told myself I wouldn't but it's awfully tempting after watching David Near's "Morgue Files." Highly recommend. I have never had so many ideas pumping through my mind

StreathamJon

I like your story so far! I just thought I'd say watch your tenses. It should all be past tense. :-)

AnlythDalar

@StreathamJon Thank you! Sorry for the late response, I had trouble resetting my account. I'm doing some exercises to make sure I catch my tendency to shift tenses. It's a bit of a struggle since it's a bad habit, but I'm getting there! I appreciate your feedback and compliment! Have a wonderful day. Bless
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