@Dragonborn2023 Thank you, you have no idea what the means. I always try to keep an open mind to what any who are brave enough to reading my stories have to say, since, after all, what is the point of asking for feedback if not to take it into consideration? Though, at the same time, I also try to maintain my vision of the story. It's a difficult balance to maintain, and I hope I've done a descent job at it.
Heath's last name is Rockhower. I didn't mention it a whole lot, as it didn't seem particularly significant, but it is in there... somewhere, lol