Annagwilliams

Hi Anna, 
          
          I just wanted to thank you for all the advice you gave me in the comments on Winfred and all the little things you were able to catch and point out for me! I'm currently rewriting a second draft of the story and giving it an overhaul, and your comments are immensely helpful in pointing out where I went wrong and where I was lacking. I just wanted to take the time to thank you for taking all the time you did to truly help make my story better.
          
          Thank you,
          
          Micah

@arilovesss 
          My dear Ari: It was my pleasure reading your work! You write so beautifully and express yourself so well that it seems you have had a lifetime of experience which belies your young age. My oldest grandson also graduated high school this year and though he's very capable; I can't imagine him doing 1/10th of all you do! I will eagerly look forward to following your future endeavors! If I can help you in any way by previewing or editing, etc., I'd be honored to do so. It is so refreshing to "know" you, a young person using your God given talents so beautifully! Thank you for sharing your talent and for the hours of enjoyment. Best wishes for your bright future and God bless you!
          Grandma Anna 
          

Hi Anna,
          
          Thank you for following me. (I apologize for not thanking you earlier. I've been out of the country and had spotty internet connection for three weeks.)
          
          Take care,
          Jules

Thank you for the follow! 

Thank you for the follow, Anna, and the same back. I look forward to keeping in touch.

thanks Anna. I thought you must be following since I thought that was the only way you got the update messages. Anyway next chapter is completed (in my head at least), so won't be long until its up there.

@Annagwilliams Thank you for the added encouragement, Anna. Moving Target was actually adapted from a stage version, which I intended to be produced low-budget -- two actors and one simple set (the sniper cave). It will be my pleasure to keep you posted on how I proceed with the concept and characters in the various formats.

Thanks again Anna. Could you highlight the two from yesterday again please.  about changing "was'" to "a" and the other one I can't recall. Sorry but wattpad was having some internal issues yesterday and although they showed up in the message, they didn't highlight. with 3700 words it was like looking for a needle in a haystack lol lol. Thanks for editing for me. Much appreciated. I will make the change to fairy land (although in hindsight, I might change the wording completely :-)

other than the corrections (now done) Any other thoughts? Now a transition back to Moscow and the Crimea. next chapter. :-)

Thanks for spotting. I will make the corrections :-)