Hey! I read your story and first of all, I think it's great that you've started writing. Finishing or even starting a fanfiction takes a lot of creativity and effort, so please keep writing as long as you're enjoying it.
A few suggestions from a reader's perspective:
–Since it's a university romance, I think readers would get hooked faster if the main leads meet earlier. They don't necessarily have to fall for each other immediately, but even a small interaction in the first chapter can create curiosity.
–I personally felt that some side characters were getting more focus than the lead pair. As a reader, I'm usually most excited to see the main couple together, whether they're arguing, bonding, or getting stuck in interesting situations.
–Your writing style is good, especially considering you're still new. The more you write, the more naturally your own style will develop.
–One thing that could make the chapters even better is proofreading before uploading. I noticed a few small wording mistakes that could easily be fixed with a quick reread.
Overall, keep writing and experimenting. Every writer improves with practice, and the most important thing is that you're enjoying the process. Don't be discouraged by suggestions—they're just things that might help make an already good story even stronger. ❤️
