@JadedGalaxies I for one really enjoyed it, I saw minimum of spelling errors and missused tenses. As with every other book there's a few things that could use some work, but over all I can appreciate how hard you worked on it, and how it turned out. I did notice you add a lot of depth to your characters, Giving them a background, family, and everyone had their own personal thing that gave a more clear picture of who they were as a character. Also finding out about Trace and her parents, I was astounded, great twist. I really sympathized with Val just as much as his victims which is a rare talent. To get someone to understand the sick murder in a horror is very difficult, and honestly I felt what pushed him over the edge. I really was blown away by the entire book, you're an excellent writer.