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Swishyfishy13

Hello! Thank you for asking my opinion of your story. It is actually very good. I have no criticism. Except some of the words might be spelt wrong? Please look into that.

WestReversed

@ Slugoman  thankyou very much, bro. And, yes, spelt wrong. I will check that. Thankyou! :b
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