Anonymous

Whats up bitch

@RavenSwift Not a problem. And don't worry, I'm in the same age group as you so I don't have much writing experience either but you'll get better with practice. 

@RavenSwift  It's pretty good so far but you might want to go back and edit a few things. There's a couple of grammar and spelling errors but that's ok. Everyone does that once in awhile. Plus you said it's your first novel so that's even more understandable.