milarygranger

Hi Author. How are you doing? Hope you are doing fine. You are not sick right? Or maybe busy. I just wanted to ask that when are you going to update next chapter of beyblade metal master? It's been almost a month or a month I guess. Please update 

Clonebustering

Okay you’re right it is hard I have written my own fan fiction but it’s copyright just a little bit. I know I may have come high strung I just hate wasted potential on characters from books that are based things I like as well from those books. You do an excellent job as a fanfic writer. I hate cliffhangers like that. I don’t have a problem with the writing it’s just I saw a good way of how a beyblade fanfic of this show is done on the first book continuing on from that that had the rest of the show. I just that she lost to ryuga that is the one battle that got me furious she’s a good character it’s just I’m rooting for her dream is all becoming a blader equal or surpassing her mother is all. I’m 100% on her side of that dream.

lightbolt

@AnonymousBlade here's a movie that involved in metal master book after the beyblade world championship and spiral force arc is over
            
            
            Metal Fight Beyblade VS The Sun: Sol Blaze, the Scorching Hot Invader
            https://youtu.be/M4ihk0zefqo?si=vTBJQqLmzgBko8e5
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AnonymousBlade

@Clonebustering I can understand. When something unfair happens to a character you like, it feels upsetting.
            (I deeply felt Kyoya was robbed, of his Win over Gingka in the anime. 
            There is literally an easy and an even better way to make this rivalry great, while maintaining the future seasons consistency.)
            
            I'm glad your enjoying the story so much. As for Haruka's wins and losses.
            Some of her losses have reasons, some that are needed to maintain a little consistency with the anime and some that are actually for my plot reasons and would be explained in the future.
            
            I try to find ways that my OC doesn't end up overshadowing the existent anime characters (since I've seen that done a lot in other fanfics, it it kind of throws me off) I want to make it feel like she's growing just like the existent characters, through her fair share of battles.
            As for moving towards her goal, every obstacle she'll overcome will indicate to her growth and strength.
            (Every character ends up facing some sort of obstacle or problem that they overcome, reaching greater heights)
            
            I'm reflecting and re-thinking on the few ideas I have till the end of this season, finding ways to make it appropriate for her development while keeping some anime consistency's that are required for my plot, and the future season.
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lightbolt

AnonymousBlade

@Msindi2024 I will keep commenting as I get the chance to read each chapter.
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lightbolt

@AnonymousBlade thanks for votes also can you plz add comments
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