Eggy_o_
Just read "Mind Games" It is a blech of an unorganised mind. Vomited to a keyboard. There is a Latin saying that I really like: "Vincit qui se vincit". He conquers who conquers himself. Doesn't matter if your head is running at %150 capacity 24/7, if you cannot put that workforce into a good labour and make something of or something from it, it is all worth jack-all. I would like to see this character, the writer of this three part diary, in an actual sitution where he is forced to come out of his mind and interact with actual people with real problems. That might have some literary value.
AnonymousKayla7
Thank you! I really appreciate the feedback and it really pushed me to keep writing. I hope you enjoy my story!
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