AnonymousWriter5

Hello to anyone who might read this. There is indeed a reason there has been no chapters posted lately. I went over what I had written and my plans for the story. I came to the realization that my outline was unfinished and it had one too many plotholes. 
          	
          	So here I am, re-making my outline from scratch to re-write EVERYTHING. As soon as I have any further updates on how that project is going, I'll speak up.

AnonymousWriter5

Hello to anyone who might read this. There is indeed a reason there has been no chapters posted lately. I went over what I had written and my plans for the story. I came to the realization that my outline was unfinished and it had one too many plotholes. 
          
          So here I am, re-making my outline from scratch to re-write EVERYTHING. As soon as I have any further updates on how that project is going, I'll speak up.

lisaaclark2

I made some notes on each of the first 3 chapters. If you would rather I don't make them there, I can delete them, and we can discuss in DM or Discord. I love the story concept so far, but you write in a telling, not feeling, style, so it's hard for me to connect at all. Let me know.

lisaaclark2

Sorry, paragraphs, not chapters.
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