AnotherDummyAccount

October 29 :)

iamlovedbytheking

Hello author!

AnotherDummyAccount

@iamlovedbytheking Why are you even apologizing? It's okay :) Maybe if I get my act together, I would dedicate a work of mine to you. But I don't think it would be very soon.
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HaveYouSeenGay11

@AnotherDummyAccount Sa totoo lang,naboboring ako sa  story mo. Wala man lang TIME and SETTING . Yung totoo, nagsulat ka lang ng walang plot o summarization o basta-basta ka lang sulat nang sulat ng story ng walang preparation. Hayy, wala man lang time and setting or any plot. Kung nakatayo ba ong characters mo o lumulutang sa ere o naka-upo o lumilipad. Tapos wala man lang TIME. Kung anong oras na ba . Kung gabi o umaga o hapo. Hayy,,,PWEE...

HaveYouSeenGay11

Panget ng mga stories mo!!!
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HaveYouSeenGay11

@HaveYouSeenXtian Oww...Sorry to say that but i dont have stories here on wattpad and writing is not my talent. I am just reading and I am just only saying my opinion. And the only thing that I would help you is please arrange the TIME and SETTING of your stories kasi hindi ko ma-imagine kung nakatayo o naka-upo , kung nakalutang ba ang characters mo. HAYYYYY..... at kung anong oras na ba. Nakaka-badvibes PO ang story mo!! ...:}}}
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AnotherDummyAccount

@HaveYouSeenXtian There's not much harm in trying, so I will still try my best even if that makes me more lame than I already am.
            
            I'll  reconsider everything. Since you're the one who pointed out my mistakes, please do help me correct them, or, at least, let me read a work of yours so I could comprehend more vividly and apply what I've learned effectively.
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LoveIsInMe

if you have time please read this cute love story!!!
          http://www.wattpad.com/story/16040804-bus-6458
          ENJOY!!! :D

AnotherDummyAccount

@LoveIsInMe Have read and enjoyed it :) I actually wrote my opinion on it. Check my work, Discovering. It's right there :)
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