Anthemis12

I was curious if you would take a look at this and maybe leave me some feedback?
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/47240530-athanasia-a-world-forgotten

Γεια! ξεκίνησα σήμερα να διαβάζω την ιστορία σου αλλά δεν μου εμφανίζονται οι συνομιλίες....Ξέρεις μήπως τι μπορω να κάνω γιατί μου φενεται πολύ ωραία ιστορία!

Υ.Γ ευχαριστω για τα καλα σας λογια!!

Some say the world will end in fire some say in ice...
          From what i've tasted of desire, i hold with thoose who favor fire...
          But if it had to perish towice, i think i know enough of hate, to say that for distruction ice is also great...