Julianne_Winters
Hi! I'm not great at explaining writing improvements but I can rewrite a few passages to show you how to write stronger paragraphs, etc. I'll do one or two on your first chapter and you can see what you think.
AnthonyShults
Julianne_Winters
Hi! Thanks for following! I hope you enjoy some of my stories. =)
AnthonyShults
@Julianne_Winters thanks and i haveI have. And while it's helped a bit. it's still difficult to make things work. So it's slow
Julianne_Winters
@AnthonyShults You should check the Mass Effect Wiki. They have an online resource and a mobile app
AnthonyShults
I apologize for the delay of my story/stories. I have been having life issues. I hope to do something soon.
Wuss_DWimp
Hey, I just want to say I enjoy reading your story. There are some stuff I would point out, but they are a bit trivial. Anyways, I like your content.
Wuss_DWimp
Also, I would often indent in between paragraphs. It helps the reader keep track of where he is at.
AnthonyShults
so.. i have never written before but i had a idea for a story.. but i dont know if i should do it.......
AnthonyShults
Why are you following me? Lol I probably won't ever write.