RealKario
Hey, been a little bit sense we last spoke. I went to go check your AO3 account again but the only connection to it I had was Outcasts which you deleted it seems... I never got to finish it as the whole ghost Sonic killing Eggman and Sonic threw me off for a while, randomly felt like finally finishing it to find deleted.
AnthonyTyler9
@RealKario yeah probably why I dropped the story as a whole. Even I forgot why I stopped but the reasons above were some of them
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RealKario
@AnthonyTyler9 I see, I put on pause reading it after the Shadow killed Sonic and Eggman. Was waiting to be in the mindstate to resume considering you seemingly were DBZ'ing it and just throwing a stronger enemy from another dimension at Izumi and her family again. And I've told you many times before how the DBZ of just throwing a stronger enemy out of nowhere at the MC turns me off a story, as Metal Sonic's arch almost did with him somehow being stronger than full dragon Izumi + Bowser for no reason. So had to set the story aside for a while to get in mood to resume reading even with the DBZ random power spike. A gradual power up of enemy is far better for story flow and reader retention if ask me.
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AnthonyTyler9
@RealKario Ah, I think I put that story up for adoption or deleted it. I haven't been able to think of how to continue the story and discontinued it. Also it wasn't getting more attention after the whole Mobius arc.
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