Hey, everyone! So....I need help. I would like to hear from you guys on what you think of my latest story, "A True Soldiers Work Is Never Done". Do you think it's missing something? If so, what do you say I should include? I'm going to try to start publishing chapters every week, so Chapter 2 will be coming out soon. But, like I said, is it missing anything? Please comment either in the story or PM me.
Thanks!