Antila_Lane

Hello all! [And by that I mean the 5 followers I have]
          	
          	I have found the chapters of "Marigold" to be cringy, as I look back at it. This is one of the reasons why I find it so hard in me to update this book, but I really don't want to give up on it.
          	
          	Is there is anyone who can give me advice on how to improve or just what you think about the objective aspects of my writing? 
          	
          	Thank you! :)

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@Antila_Lane Please, Houseki no kuni's on an indefinite haitus and It feels like I'm already in hell just for waiting
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Antila_Lane

Also RIP your keyboard lol
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Antila_Lane

@AWSTWID Okay, A, Noted, thank you :> B, Thank you! I never really saw it like that but I'm glad planning all the events out payed of. And C, Please dont, It's hell HAHA
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Antila_Lane

Hello all! [And by that I mean the 5 followers I have]
          
          I have found the chapters of "Marigold" to be cringy, as I look back at it. This is one of the reasons why I find it so hard in me to update this book, but I really don't want to give up on it.
          
          Is there is anyone who can give me advice on how to improve or just what you think about the objective aspects of my writing? 
          
          Thank you! :)

UN-CIERRA-NTY

@Antila_Lane Please, Houseki no kuni's on an indefinite haitus and It feels like I'm already in hell just for waiting
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Antila_Lane

Also RIP your keyboard lol
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Antila_Lane

@AWSTWID Okay, A, Noted, thank you :> B, Thank you! I never really saw it like that but I'm glad planning all the events out payed of. And C, Please dont, It's hell HAHA
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