love4music24
I think you're an amazing artist and poem writter. :3
I'm nit very good at giving advice, but try find some other people on wattpad, who's works yiu enjoy, then follow them, and try pick up on anything you like most about there books, and try some incoperating those same things into yours, don't copy of course, but I mean just try look for inspiration. Like their tone and such :3
Antinuos
Ahhh thank you for your advice :3! I thought about incorporating some pieces of sentences into my things but it didn't work, but I'll try my best to make it work :D I really appreciate your advice ^^!