Deep4141

Hey, how’s it going?
          
          My story "Die Another Death: The Underworld relocated.........right into my town !!!" is an entry for the Watty awards. I would very much like it if u could read it and comment on it. Feel free to criticize, point out typos and so on. Your feedback is important to me. If u like it, maybe u could vote for it and become a fan. ;-P :)) I will return the favor for your works.
          Thanks in advance !!!   ;-D  ;-)  
          
          Here’s the link to my story chapters- 
          http://www.wattpad.com/535720-die-another-death-the-underworld-relocated-right 
          http://www.wattpad.com/535804-die-another-death-the-underworld-relocated-right