@AnkitaPrasanna you can get it published with little bit of editing. Is amazing.
The beginning chapters storyline is excellent but mentioning the distance (time taken to travel) b/w yatee's parental home and matrimonial home.
When and how long she stayed with in-laws etc there is little bit of ambiguity
And then when they had to flee...The presence of MIL in Yatee's parental home etc...
But if these minor things are ironed out, this makes a wonderful novel. Do publish it. Your writing is gripping, mature and depicts indian socio-cultual aspects very well