Aoi

@01jayeon well the plot needs a little foreshadowing. Shinobi are members of a special force and yeah everyone is a supernatural creature here

@01jayeon ofcourse I can. It's really well written but I didn't understand some words. Who are shinobies??  And what do you mean by her hair turn into crimson is she any paranormal creature??? Except this I enjoyed reading. 

@01jayeon  Umm... you read the first chapter of my book right? Can you give me a feedback too? 

@ROSSYTHV07 you can make changes.  Just unpublish your story for a while, improve it and repost. None of your veiws or votes will be removed. 

Oh ok yes I felt it too as I read my story again and I can't change it now...the thing Rm couldn't marry is that he already loved lia and that's why he wasn't interested in marriage too but it's my fault not mentioning it properly and as it's my first book and also I had a big confusion of this story while writing it...I wasn't able to write it properly as I imagined....But anyways thank you so much for telling me this which I would improve it if I write another story...

@ROSSYTHV07 I don't want to sound arrogant there. You've got a nice plot obviously, with so much recognition but, it can be made better. I just wanted to mention one more thing, the reasons why RM couldn't marry Y/N and why she had to marry in their family are kind of irrelevant. Cuz whatever the problem in US was,  it could have been handled by his father or some trusted employee. You can change it to something like he already has a love interest and argues that tae doesn't so he should be the one.
            Then there is Y/N's case, you can do it like insted of her parents forcing her, it was Jimin as he knew tae loves her and she loves him back. No offense though d=(´▽｀)=b