Aparna Roy

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          Ps: you can try my other book too

Hey Reader,
          
          Thank you so much for voting on my story "His Sunshine & Her Khadoos".
          
          It really means a lot to me.
          
          I've also started a new story "Promise: Her Last Wish" recently-feel free to check it out if you're interested 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/404871316?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=discover_row_story&wp_page=discover_list&wp_uname=Writer__Riu

@Starwoventales well it's not. It's just that the prologue is just full of dark romance I think you should put a scene of the childhood memories of the leads which will make it more acknowledging and remove a bit of smunt from the prologue many readers might feel uncomfortable to read this at the very first of the story that to when it is a professor student one. And if you could describe the leads feeling more deeply it would be more good. 
          
          Overall the story is good just need a little more effort to