Aphmau999

So I wrote a new story "Least Favorite child" I know the title and description dont really fit the story. Where chapter 1 ended leaves the story at a descent spot for a chapter long story.
          	If you guys could just give me your opion on it. I'm not really liking the name so if you have any ideas, I'm open to them. If you guys want me to add on to it and made it longer and more story like I can do that too. I have some ideas for it that I kinda want to expand on, but I'm not too sure at the moment.
          	All feedback is welcome.

Zctym33

@Aphmau999 I don't mind at all, lmao. You don't even have to give me any credit for the name, although if you want to I certainly don't mind. You're very welcome!
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Aphmau999

@Zctym33 "Do it for her" sounds amazing. I hope you dont mind if I use that for the title. I think it fits the story so much better. Thank you so much.
          	  If you dont want me using that name or you want credit for the name, just let me know. I really appreciate the feed back
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sonicthebi

@Aphmau999 how about maybe making it abit longer and make him do more daring thing to support his little sister and maybe someone who could help him out when he really needs it
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-18-00-L0VE

Im sorry but i cant see only a slave did sth happen to your acc? :<

Aphmau999

@-18-00-L0VE I don't have a copy of it anywhere else. I'm sorry, it's just gone
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frenchtoast8_8

@Aphmau999 is it possible to re upload it?…
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frenchtoast8_8

Noooo!!
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