I love your book 'Found In The Woods' I have some advice for it you don't have to use it but it's what I do for my chapters anyways so I learned this in a writing class and whenever someone says something apparently you're supposed to make a new paragraph every time
Example:
"I like Nutella." She said.
"I like narwhals." He replied
So instead of doing
"Food."
"Yum!"
Try adding an extra space thingy between the sentences.
Again, you don't have to use this advice it's just something that I learned lol
Okie BAI!
~Tiger Out <3
