Saturnine_morose

Hi! I'd like to ask for your opinion: actually I'm translating my story because I want to share it and I hope to find new feedbacks. Could I ask for your help? 
          It's called "Witch of Clevwood's Ruins" and talks about Alex's journey, as a witch, into the enemies' land, following the princess that captured her (it's GL)
          Thanks either way!