Hi author! Gusto ko lang po mag-suggest sana, na baka po puwede n'yong i-improve pa ang inyong writing style at ‘yung plot ng story. Minsan po kasi, medyo nakakalito o mahirap sundan, kaya nahihirapan akong intindihin.
Yung story n’yo po na "I Saved the Tyrant Villain, Then Became His Wife" (or something like that, di ko na po sure sa exact title hehe), ayun po yung example.
Suggestion ko lang naman po ito, hehe. Sana po ma-improve pa lalo yung flow ng kwento at mas malinaw yung thought. Salamat po and more power sa writing!