Apocaline

Okay, so:

First, I suck at editing, so point out stuff that you think could be better.

Second, hate is not accepted.

Third, I need CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM (Google it), not some dick (male or female) just hating on my work and telling me I'm not good enough. I flip for other authors who get treated like that, and I will not tolerate it. Writing is a form of art, coming from our brains, that people can freely choose to read or not. You don't like my art? Then stop commenting on it. There are plenty of other people who do enjoy it and they don't need you ruining their story.

Four, Manners. You can ship as you please or beg for me to kill off so and so (I've been there myself, can't blame you) but keep in mind that I do control the story. I will happily read all comments, and probably will add some of your ideas (Credits given of course, and feel free to PM) but it's my choice.

Five, Enjoy :) and thank you very much for reading.