@may_bornmia OK SO! JHDLJHDLJDADBAJDBA Not too short, not too long and each of the chapters were an adequate length. The story flowed really nicely- this was my first 'love at a hospital' book. genre and I wasn't disappointed, you did an amazing job! I think it would be nicer if you added the rest of the skz members in there somehow and then have a female friend of some sort for Yuna, then backstories/ more detail about life before they entered the hospital, etc like how their specific individual diseases/ illnesses started/ developed over time and maybe explain or like add more detail for the intermission and epilogue in case people don't understand it, but overall, everything was perfect and it's a really refreshing yet simple story to read well done, you deserve alot of praise for this book :)