@Apollo109928
@Tasty-Unagi im afraid ill be traumatized by unpopular ntr doujins with no wiki cause i dont wanna go through the trouble reading that shit
@Tasty-Unagi i don think i wanna read lovecome cause im already traumatized from all the ntrs i had to read and watch thatll be adding here I watched otome dori earlier to get a feel of the mc's pain And no more
@Tasty-Unagi most ntr victims dont have any sort if leadership skills at all,most of them are portrayed as losers,and pathetic scare dense idiots Also the hiroki in this story has the ability to adapt as he took care of a research lab destroying it from within by contacting the government,and creating a huge scene to escape,and get revenge No one outs og ntr victims in fanfics cause all of them are dense idiots that cant do anything to protect their love ones None of them actually have any sort of skill,there only purpose in the story is to suffer But with anti-ntr fanfics they either become righteous heroes,or monsters that torture them to get revenge I puts hiroki cause he was the first ntr fanfic ive seen in wattpad If i did nepotism it wouldn't be for hiroki,it would be for ayato,cause not like hiroki that has experience with combat Ayato was a weak boy that turned into a femboy in the original story So no i did not make hiroki the leader and the founder cause i glaze him,because if i did it would be for ayato I only did it to make him the instigator of hate,because he'll be one of them in charge of recruiting members
Hello. I want to ask something regarding your story.
@Apollo109928 In addition, Hiroki is overused and I'm tired to pretend it not. Why don't just erased him from existence, so Hiroki stuff will be reduced, giving other NTR MC shines more? Because honestly, after dives more in many anti-NTR fanfic, which DOMINATED by Hiroki/KnT stuff, slowly making me resent him, or even outright HATE him. Sorry for the rude statement, but it's my honest feeling about overabundance of Hiroki. If I were you, I will immediately remove Hiroki, retcon him with other poor NTR MC, especially Takeru from LoveCome (read it if you dare). Because Takeru is suffer a lot more than Hiroki, getting all of his female relatives PREGNANT and leave him all alone. It enough to make Hiroki like a child's play.
@Apollo109928 I just want to see Hiroki get demoted as a leader. In addition he is already overused here. By adding him, you just add another Hiroki fanfic. Also, in addition, seriously, why is always him as the leader or center of the group? Isn't there any NTR MC that more suitable as the leader? Or it's a matter of favoritism and NEPOTISM that you choose him as a leader? Anyway, why don't appoint other NTR MC as a leader, like Ayato or other NTR MC that already have an experience in organization like student council?
Hello, can I ask you several questions?
Why is always Hiroki that appointed as a leader? Isn't there other NTR victim which is worthy. Also, I read his bio that you seems overglaze him.
Don't get me wrong. I don't think that Hiroki have the leadership capability. Hell, even in his OG doujin, he is never seems to join any organization, let alone leading the others. He is just being popular.
So, can you replace Hiroki with other NTR victim? I mean, Hiroki stuff is already flooded here and I don't want to see more Hiroki stuff.
Thank you and wishing for Hiroki's demotion and replaced by others.
@Apollo109928 Also, here's what you know to appoint the leader: There must be the majority of vote to select him. And you never mention it in your story. No vote-taking among the NTR MC. It just simply chosen by god, as if Hiroki is prophet while other NTR MC NEVER get the same treatment. So it is same to assume you just choose him simply "Oh, Hiroki is the most popular! He is suitable as a leader yada yada yada!" Meanwhile, I never see any of NTR MC getting a treatment as a leader. All of them is ALWAYS as the subordinate. Incapable to make the decision. Not having power for decision-making. In the end, it always Hiroki that make the final decision, overwhelming other NTR MC. *sigh* And now, by appointing Hiroki, it just repeating the same fanfic over and over, Hell, maybe there one rule: "Hiroki is always the leader, nobody can be a leader except him." A rule that must be obey by every anti-NTR writer, and if someone deny it, for example, making Shouya as a leader, it will be deem heretic. Sorry for the rant. I just want to see the leader besides Hiroki. Simple. He is way too overused. By making him a leader, you keep adding a further glaze, just like other Hiroki fanfic.
@Apollo109928 Yeah, sadly, still unconvince me. You just make him a leader simply because he is "popular" and the "first" one. Why don't choose other, less popular NTR MC as a leader? Let me guess: too scared. You are too scared to make some difference. Too afraid to defy the mainstream. But alas, this is another anti-NTR fanfic featuring Hiroki as a leader. Why don't people stop using him as a leader simply because he is popular?
@Apollo109928 Well, thanks for the explanation. Still, why is always Hiroki include in every anti-NTR fanfic? I know he is popular, but doesn't mean you just put him in ensemble as a leader. Also, your appointment of Hiroki as a leader still unconvince me. Y'know, the leader MUST have the experience in organization, something that Hiroki lacks. Imagine you appointing people who don't have organizational experience as a leader. Guess what's happens? Your organization will be fall into a shambles. Same as appointing Hiroki. He doesn't have organizational capabilities. But then, you just point him out of nowhere, without any in-universe explanation and objection. The leader must be selected in strict requirement and must have the majority votes. Well, I think the only explanation is one: NEPOTISM.
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@Apollo109928 It's way better to replace Hiroki with others. He is unsuitable as a leader and you just overglaze him, treating him like a golden child. Hell, I can't see him act as a leader in OG story, let alone being part of the organization. Then, BAM! You glaze him. Give him craziest power that other NTR victim never get it. You make him as a central of group. And with that, it is always guaranteed that the central of group gets more treatment than the other. With this, Hiroki will get more focus than others. He stole all of the spotlight and let the other vanished in obscurity.
For ANTI ntr REPUBLIC..FOR SAFTY OF OUR WOMEN AND LOVED ONES FOR MY KINGDOM SOLDIERS MARCH FORWARDED
LEGION OF THE BETRAYED
Founder: hiroki mori,a tactical genius, the founder of the anti ntr community,the one that will end all ntr from the hentaiverse
Betrayed by his family and his girlfriend for a black guy,he fought him using illegal tactics like injuring him without him being there or a anywhere to be blamed for it,h killed the bastard by switching a medicine for a poisoned one
Nature:brutal technician
Right hand man:oozami kazuya,was forced to watch his idol girlfriend get gangraped by a bunch of horny ugly rich men,to the extent where his heart breaks,he was willing to kill himself,but stopped at the last second, when he smelled a wift of cocaine
After getting addicted in drugs he started showing the opposite results of using drugs,he became agile,fast,athleticly buffed,trained bounty hunter,his love turned to the drugs that helped him to overcome everything he feared,he got back at those pathetic ugly bastards and made a fool of their lives and of course took their remaining money,and organs to buy more drugs
I am still thinking of other members i may even add ayato in this story aswell
Comment down below any ntr mc's that you want to be in this story,and a trait that they will show in it
This story will come after the end of "what if the emotionless freak becomes the last man alive"
@Apollo109928 To be fair, why always Hiroki that becomes the leader. Getting all of the good power? Isn't Kazuya or and Ayato isn't good enough? Hell, in the end, it just another Hiroki fanfic slop where Hiroki STEALS all of the spotlight due to being popular and being a leader of team. Meanwhile, the other NTR MC will slowly overshadowed by Hiroki, only get negligible chance to shine. Hoping the writer will change and retcon the leader here.
@PeterDRasel i could do that... But then again if i did nerf them to the level of the ntr antagonists,then their missions would kinda take longer,im also gonna reveal their backstories i. Detail on how they got overpowered Because ntr antagonists aren't really that powerful,the ntred guy can just pull with a gun and shoot the antagonist,cause he has nothing to lose An epic fight scene with the ntr antagonists,is kinda unrealistic, but dont get me wrong i like the idea,its just not in the ntr's that ill be putting in this story Also thanks. For the feedback,i know i have alot of room for improvement,and feedbacks like this motivates me more into writing these stories
@Apollo109928 in my opinion, let's not make the NTR'd characters overpower. hear me out. like, unknown character came out of nowhere and overpowered the NTR antagonist and from this place, it take where it will be difficult and it may take few rounds of epic fight to finally manage to defeat the Ntr antagonist. many made Anti-ntr story that actually good, but sometimes you should be different. I'm not forcing you but take a look at my novel and you will understand. also, if you didn't find my idea interesting then that's fine and i also will definitely read your new book.
Great ANTI NTR SOTRY KEEP YOUR HEAD UP GOD BLESS
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