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"Jaw tensed, his sunset eyes sunk low to look down at me. There was something conflicting in them, as if he held a raging internal battle, but I had no guesses to what it was over. My eyes, as if on their own accord, slipped from his entrancing ones, down his narrow nose, and onto his lips, pinker than usual because of the icy winds. His lower lip hung heavier than the top, especially since they were slightly parted. From here, I could almost taste his Spearmint breath, and I discreetly leaned forward for more of the intoxicating scent."
http://www.wattpad.com/story/1610110-cross-my-heart