AprilAndRed

Part 5 of “The Protagonist Syndrome” is up!
          	Calling all fellow writers: if you’re good at character analysis or spotting bad story flow, please help me.
          	
          	I’m not sure if I’m doing the right thing in my novel. Are the characters lovable or hateable? (The worst is forgettable) Is the writing off already?
          	
          	I need some strong inputs and criticisms before I put up the big twists in the story. (All comments are welcome including harsh ones—I badly want to improve) I’m no pro so there’s a lot of mistakes for sure. Thank you in advance to those who can help <3
          	
          	Sending all of you my best wishes ♥️♥️♥️
          	Thanks again for following me, I follow back ASAP (permanently)

morehappy2gether

Sorry for plug!
          
          I just want to promote my story'The Mystery Woman' the first story that i Write,if you are interest to read this.Hope you enjoy to reading this.
          
          -Thank you∩__∩
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/259714940?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info℘_page=story_details_button℘_uname=morehappy2gether℘_originator=8cfhJIux2Yhv0mJul3Ue0mm9SYUFEyOzYSXVXwoe84Qy7z1a7KwEKzu4icpmON%2Btk5uvHkuyHG8qLBE7PPlEDhm2cIx1H1d2w4qyK2h0EtQlxRBJ%2Bu7Y%2Bk%2FwNdtpeWH1

AprilAndRed

Part 5 of “The Protagonist Syndrome” is up!
          Calling all fellow writers: if you’re good at character analysis or spotting bad story flow, please help me.
          
          I’m not sure if I’m doing the right thing in my novel. Are the characters lovable or hateable? (The worst is forgettable) Is the writing off already?
          
          I need some strong inputs and criticisms before I put up the big twists in the story. (All comments are welcome including harsh ones—I badly want to improve) I’m no pro so there’s a lot of mistakes for sure. Thank you in advance to those who can help <3
          
          Sending all of you my best wishes ♥️♥️♥️
          Thanks again for following me, I follow back ASAP (permanently)

AprilAndRed

To whomever is promoting page and works: THANK YOU
          I don't know who you guys are but I am very grateful. A couple of days ago, I don't know anyone...Not a  single soul. Now I'm up to 100+ followers. 
          
          For my lovely followers, if any of you can give me pointers in writing no matter how harsh, please do. I want to be a good writer but I don't know how to improve. I'm only writing to cope up with being ill but somehow, this helps me get through the days. 
          
          Again, thank you for the overwhelming support. Sending love to all of you!

kimberly_rash

@AprilAndRed  anytime :)
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AprilAndRed

@kimberly_rash Wow that's a lot...Thanks again Kim! <3 This is a good start for me
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kimberly_rash

@AprilAndRed  lol it was meeeeee
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NikkiPierceBooks

Hi! I just wanted to pop by and say thank you for following me! I really hope you enjoy my book if you get the chance to read it. It’s a contemporary romance called Just Press Send. If you ever want to chat please message me or comment on my book– I love to talk about reading or writing! Have a great rest of your day!

AprilAndRed

@NikkiPierceBooks Welcome! I always follow back because I am very new here :)
            Yes, actually I have your works on my reading list. Will be continuing my reading soon!
            
            If you get the chance, I'd love your input on any of my works too. Though I haven't written much yet hihi. Have a great day as well!
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AJ_airah

Hello author hihi sorry for plugging in just wanna share my first ever story here in wattpad!!! Yehey!!!! Hhaha char lang...
          
          Hope you don't mind btw lovelots mwahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
          
          
          
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/264928674?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=historiapolonia&wp_originator=vOzmfuhiEG6KY%2B%2FdWpTc2pKqgZ4%2FIBcIafJ04kUQs3FptImMmC2lRDS5pfLX4gk%2FvW1iMNDiD%2F49z3HaM1cO8fxXeUXgP0IE1vjs%2B8xjnof7MyLfZft%2FQfUQFL6J2VUj

AprilAndRed

@historiapolonia Sure! I'm looking for stuff to read as well. Just give me some time to finish the requests :) If you get the time too, please check out my works :) They're all pretty short hihi
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thefictionalwitch

Hey there...if you are looking for something to read, I'd be really happy if you check out my book. I published a few chapters and I'm kinda new here, so I'd really love to have your opinions.
          Stay safe ❤
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/266624931?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=thefictionalwitch&wp_originator=X9CxEIzcp6%2FJzRtY4xjermBdWr0l3ndb179fDZeu1Fw9yL61xb%2BotSeq4ymO0boycmnmKoesFsyL3sqVXtzn32%2FTNRPGTykQMLJhuo%2FV6ZnGlUhuSNUL%2BBt4eb3Jwh82

thefictionalwitch

@AprilAndRed ofcourse I will ❤
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AprilAndRed

@thefictionalwitch Yes, I am looking for stuff to read :) Please check out my works too if you have the time (they're all short hehe)
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noFOOKINidea

Hi.
          I hope you're accepting reading requests. I've started a new story "an anatomy of a wounded soul". It is a thrill/mystery teen fiction. 
          
          https://my.w.tt/MosMBd8jW5
          
          I hope you take a chance to read the story. 
          
          Please do and leave feedbacks. 
          
          Thank you.
          Aditi.
          ❤

AprilAndRed

@noFOOKINidea Definitely! I'll read it ASAP. If you have time to read any of my works too, please drop by ^_^
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