MelonSnail

Hi! MelonSnail here!
          
          I just started writing my first book and I would appreciate it so much if you could check it out. I will try to update the next chapters as soon as possible:)
          
          https://my.w.tt/A4Mqb8E7k5
          
          As this is my first book and I'm also not a native English speaker, I would really appreciate some constructive criticism if possible (I'm aware that I'm probably not the best writer but I'd love to improve!).
          
          Have a lovely day and stay safe with corona going on!