Aqilah_xoxo

Waalaikumussalam sister,
          
          Your story is good Manshallah, just include more details whether concerning the characters or the scenery. Also try extending your chapters so that you could create more of a build up amongst the characters. Such as the chemistry between the two main characters. Hope this helps you in’sha’allah and wish nothing but the best. 
          
          P.s let me know what you think of my story. Best wishes xx