AquaSummer

@SydneyMckinley Hey, so I read your story and it sounds really good and gives the feeling that your have some great ideas going on. One thing to watch out for, and I personally do this all the time, is switching between past tense and present tense. Anyway I like what going on so far. And I look forward for the next chapter. I hope this helped!!!! 

@AquaSummer OK thanks 

@SydneyMckinley  Yeah I'll do that soon.

Can you read my story and tell me what you think? http://www.wattpad.com/story/16447160-little-pleasures

@jncahill yeah it was really good
          

Thanks for reading!

AWE! :') Thanks for following me! Your so sweet!