ArcReader_1080

I want to start improving my writing on my stories as now reading them again,  it does start to feel a bit dull and the characters do act a bit bland. So if there any tips of ways you guys think on how I should improve the writing in these stories?

Mexicanboi2005

@ArcReader_1080 no probs man
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ArcReader_1080

@Mexicanboi2005 thank you
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Mexicanboi2005

@ArcReader_1080 gives the characters an emotion and improves the grammar. Well, that's all I could do
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