OftenLychee
I read your story on fp but it's not letting me login so I'll just write here.
Anyways your story's amazing like so many emotions every single chapter. I remember this summer I started reading it and I was immediately hooked. I remember how I was on vacation still so I had crappy Internet and any time I could get signal, I'd load a new chapter. This story is refreshing to read compared to other stories that are getting popular on here like they'd be so redundant. It's like reading the same story over and over. I'd read them for a while, but stop because it's like you'd know what's going to happen next. Your story is hard to put down. I only stopped because no internet or there were no chapters left.
Well I don't read sequels much but I hope yours will be just as great if not better.
Keep writing yo :DDD
OftenLychee
I thought I responded a while back but I guess it didn't work. (I might've forget to send idk)
Anyways
The whole story is beyond great and personally my favorite part was when everyone was traveling. I enjoy adventure in stories and I like how Anne and Zephyr were all close like Anne trusted him and gave him a chance despite all the things she'd been taught about him. Then that one part when Zephyr projected the images while Anne told the story of Star Wars, I thought that was pretty cool, especially imagining it. It's a great read and I would definitely recommend it to friends.
Arcangelathanos
@OftenLychee Aww, that's so sweet! I'm really glad you enjoyed reading it! I was looking over my old files the other day and i realized that I've spent so much time (like about four years) working on this story so it makes my day to know that someone else is enjoying my labor of love. I totally understand where you're coming from with stories being predicable and whatnot. I start and stop reading so many fics because time is valuable and sometimes I just can't do it. I wish i could give an accurate timeline of how long it's going to be until I start posting again... I *think* I've worked out the main plot, but I'm not really sure. I'm one of those odd folks who like origin stories the best, so I tell myself that this is all one loooong story to keep myself motivated. So, now that you're no longer on vacation, is it good enough to tell your friends about? :-) I'm oddly self-conscious so I've only told a handful of my own friends. Also, since you're reading this...what was your favorite part? This I'm asking because I'm trying to consider the dynamics for the sequel.
