Archangel61

Hello everyone,
          	
          	I’m unpublishing Honkai Impact: Knight of Sky Silver. Looking back at it, I realized that I rushed things too quickly and made it pretty generic. Looking back on it now, I’m not proud of how things went. 
          	
          	I also wasn’t planning this more thoroughly and ended up causing the story into becoming cliche. 
          	
          	I may end up posting it again, but not without a LOT of revision and do overs.

Akapon-kun

@Archangel61 I'll be honest, there were parts that I found interesting, but others that are cliché, I'm not an expert, but I have read many similar stories, when they put the protagonist as captain, the previous one is always a very bad person, but I hope the story will be published again, because it is something very well written, except for those small details, good luck in your projects and thank you for answering me, again, not to belittle your work, on the contrary, I thank you for bringing a fanfics of this game.
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Archangel61

@Akapon-kun Like I said, I will admit I messed up. It’s also why I haven’t updated that fanfic for months. I’m not proud of how it went and the direction it was going. It was too cliche. You actually opened my eyes and it was the kick in the pants I needed.
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Akapon-kun

@Archangel61 Hey, I'm surprised how quickly you answered, I'll tell you something funny, I was just reading the chapter on "rumors spread."
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Archangel61

Hello everyone,
          
          I’m unpublishing Honkai Impact: Knight of Sky Silver. Looking back at it, I realized that I rushed things too quickly and made it pretty generic. Looking back on it now, I’m not proud of how things went. 
          
          I also wasn’t planning this more thoroughly and ended up causing the story into becoming cliche. 
          
          I may end up posting it again, but not without a LOT of revision and do overs.

Akapon-kun

@Archangel61 I'll be honest, there were parts that I found interesting, but others that are cliché, I'm not an expert, but I have read many similar stories, when they put the protagonist as captain, the previous one is always a very bad person, but I hope the story will be published again, because it is something very well written, except for those small details, good luck in your projects and thank you for answering me, again, not to belittle your work, on the contrary, I thank you for bringing a fanfics of this game.
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Archangel61

@Akapon-kun Like I said, I will admit I messed up. It’s also why I haven’t updated that fanfic for months. I’m not proud of how it went and the direction it was going. It was too cliche. You actually opened my eyes and it was the kick in the pants I needed.
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Akapon-kun

@Archangel61 Hey, I'm surprised how quickly you answered, I'll tell you something funny, I was just reading the chapter on "rumors spread."
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JinnyKisaragi

Hey there. How's it going for you? I was wondering if your going to be making a new BlazBlue x Devil May Cry crossover. That last one you use to have was pretty cool. I know I asked you this in the past, but can you PLEASE make one that also includes both Naoto & Nero? That be awesome. And it can be called the Alpha Six, instead of the Alpha Four.

JinnyKisaragi

Aw man. Well at least you told me the reason why. But hopefully you'll find a solution to it. I'll be rooting for you!
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Archangel61

Hey there. I’m not making a new crossover, mostly because let’s just say I’m not proud of how that went. Mostly due to varying factors. I’m sorry, but I’m not making it anytime soon.
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