ArcherXZ

Drink, Drink, Drunk (Chapter 21) has been unpublished for the time being. After a reader expressed their distaste of it and I, for the first time in years, actually read it, I found that it was inappropriate and disgusting.
          	
          	I will be reviewing the book and making changes as I deem necessary until I decide that it now represents a piece of work I would like to continue with.
          	
          	Thank you for your understanding.

Pyre627

@ArcherXZ So how's it going, how ya doing? It's been awhile since we've heard from you
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MetaTheGamer

Like for instance if the one drinking is the mc I wouldn’t worry too much about that. I mean the dude dies… a lot. He has to find a way to cope with that trauma and depending on whether it’s unhealthy or not it seems like a realistic outcome
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MetaTheGamer

That’s fair man. My advice is don’t stress yourself out too much over all that stuff because in the end it’s fictional and it’s your story so whatever you find uncomfortable do with as you wish but don’t worry too much about what others think
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ArcherXZ

Drink, Drink, Drunk (Chapter 21) has been unpublished for the time being. After a reader expressed their distaste of it and I, for the first time in years, actually read it, I found that it was inappropriate and disgusting.
          
          I will be reviewing the book and making changes as I deem necessary until I decide that it now represents a piece of work I would like to continue with.
          
          Thank you for your understanding.

Pyre627

@ArcherXZ So how's it going, how ya doing? It's been awhile since we've heard from you
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MetaTheGamer

Like for instance if the one drinking is the mc I wouldn’t worry too much about that. I mean the dude dies… a lot. He has to find a way to cope with that trauma and depending on whether it’s unhealthy or not it seems like a realistic outcome
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MetaTheGamer

That’s fair man. My advice is don’t stress yourself out too much over all that stuff because in the end it’s fictional and it’s your story so whatever you find uncomfortable do with as you wish but don’t worry too much about what others think
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NICKJ12

Question,I couldn't find the white fang raid in Deadman walking is it being reworked

ArcherXZ

@NICKJ12 ahhh. Painting The Town... (Chapter 22)
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NICKJ12

@NICKJ12 nah I meant the Roman robot part, where they introduce neo
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ArcherXZ

@NICKJ12 By White Fang Raid, do you mean when the Fang are discovered with the Train? Or when they attack Beacon?
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