ArchieX2Y

Got it.

@Dagger2256 rewriting it to be better, i realized so much mistakes i've made, Coricus and the distance from the girls, he barely ever spend any close time with them, the massive amount of protagonist(that i'm cutting down a lot), too much elements from other animes, Coricus's inconsistent power level that you would think he would have gotten a lot stronger, and I'm always offtrack with more villains than focusing on the main one.
            
            I'm working on the new one, an improvement but shorter chapters which are healthier for me to do, sticking to how Coricus was supposed to be like from even the original, and the formula on how to introduce each girl and give them more spotlight, I'm keeping Alpha, Bobby, Marlon, Zach

@DioBrandon724 

@darkwars12345 its fine

@darkwars12345 I don't have any plans for that, sorry

@ArchieX2Y thanks for explaining it

@AaronPerezRibera There were a lot of issues with how the story was presented, like Kanaloa's curse from the main book, but instead of Levi who was never shown to overcome instead his sister has to do it which I got lost in doing, how his parents ever allowed him to go to a foreign country knowing his notorious record and how sudden he became so attached and easily battle ready when he mentioned he didn't like Pokemon

@AaronPerezRibera Remaking it

@RareHunter0 that's cool, ah that brings me memories