Megamaniac67

I don't want to take the whole group to the future on the ben 10,000 episode. I'm thinking of it just being Ben, Gwen and Ruby. We'll see their future selves in there though.

Archie_leo

@Megamaniac67 Make Billy and Yang the ones responsible for distracting Max until they're ready because it's almost impossible to chop down that many trees in like what? 5 minutes.
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Megamaniac67

If you were to rewrite the dream Ben has at the beginning of Ghost freaked out to be more terrifying, how would you do it, to actually affect Ben.

Archie_leo

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@Megamaniac67 I'm not really sure hmmmm... maybe a relaxing episode because our team needs a break of all crazy shit happen to them or Ben meet some characters from mha Vigilant because in the end of that spind off they go to USA to be heroes and when the Vigilants told Ben about what happens to them because of Japa law and a lot of heroes treated them like Villains even though they save peoples and Ben after hear that start to roast every hero in MHA world and Gwen said something like "oh man are all peoples in your country is more stupid than that Dweeb" or a mix or you came up with something else it's all fine and a little advice try to add a little more details for the scenes because it's hard sometimes to imagine
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Megamaniac67

@Archie_leo btw, I wanted to ask, now that we're almost season 3, are their any characters you'd want to include- or custom episodes to add?
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Megamaniac67

I've never hated Hatsume more than I have in this story: https://www.wattpad.com/1537002072-deku-the-next-wielder-of-the-omnitrix-book-1/page/2

Archie_leo

@Megamaniac67 and we all know what will happen if she try that *remember what happens to Kevin and Vilgax when they try to take off the Omnitrix bare hands*
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Archie_leo

@Megamaniac67 well I honestly ain't let touch the Omnitrix if it was with me I still want to stay alive and I love the universe
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Megamaniac67

She'll tinker with it at least
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Megamaniac67

Imagine this scene for Mirko and Four Arms during the Galactic enforcers episode: https://youtu.be/v_jcbz1fqdk btw Mirko doesn't know Ben's age here and when he turns back she is ashamed and the character who will be her love pairing will chuckle after getting on her nerves. (Let me cook)

Megamaniac67

@Archie_leo I just wanted Ruby to take everyone by suprise by that, and what better suprise than taking out the villian of the day?
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Archie_leo

@Megamaniac67 I think the knights have some aliens technology that can deal some damage to Shazam and maybe there's some of the knights can use Aura and that because they hate aliens so they don't wanna any help from aliens and they also hate Quirks because some of them have aliens like power but a lot weaker than original alien and consider most of humans can use aura they maybe have no problem with them
            
            It's a good idea but we can maybe make it even better that shot didn't kill Zs'Skayr but it almost killed him and then Grampa Max comes with the clutch with his sun gun or make the time like 5 or 6 in the morning and the sun is about to show up and Ben finishes him like he did in the classic timeline.
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Megamaniac67

I think I should skip the galactic patrol episode altogether, go straight to ghostfreak episode. Ruby will have her epic moment soon though.

Archie_leo

@Megamaniac67 tbh I think a ten year old Ben would say something to Mirko like "Did you escape from a mental hospital? Because I personally love fighting but you're acting like a crazy dude for wanting it"
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Megamaniac67

@Archie_leo It is done. Next will be the Ultimate weapon and I'm thinking I could possibly do the galactic enforcers episode but have a bunch of MHA pros come because they were visiting. They offer to help out and this gives Ben his development. I also will have it to where Ben is crushing on Mirko (he may or may not grow out of this. It's like a normal thing for a kid his age) and Mirko saying later that he should think about his present company. Yang and Ruby will be jealous.
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Megamaniac67

Alright then camp fear is next then lol
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Megamaniac67

I'm thinking of starting the Neo Chapter out with the world learning about the omnitrix and that Wonder Woman is taking her under her wing so Ben can keep heroing without some bs about acting without a liscense. Also it will definetly inspire others around the world to make a difference in their community even if they have no quirk. They can still be a hero.

Archie_leo

@Megamaniac67 Yes and also let me imagine that you are good at something and you took years of training and things like that and then a ten-year-old kid comes along and immediately becomes a hero and he is doing what you are doing but ten times better. This is damage to pride that will never heal.
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Megamaniac67

@Archie_leo because their society is so quirk based?
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Archie_leo

@Megamaniac67
            I can already imagine their faces as they pretend Ben is their best friend.
            
            And do you know why I said MHA would get a slap in the face if they saw Ben at 10 years old already a hero?
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Megamaniac67

Check this art out for the Neo chapter! https://pin.it/2isUN5lDG

Archie_leo

@Megamaniac67 We can make this after what we saw before after Ben defeated the bullies the two decided to have some ice cream because Neo wants to thank him for the help (like I said before Ben has no idea that she can defeat them) and now if you please (I faint from the cuteness of the picture)
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Megamaniac67

Hey I had an idea for switching up the plot of camp fear a bit. I want to have the mushroom mutant thing be replaced by a Grimm plant experiment. And held captive is the presumed dead mother of Ruby, Summer Rose. Salem made her an aura battery for 4 years since her capture. Basically Ben and the others save her and Ruby is so glad to have her mom back.

Archie_leo

@Megamaniac67 It's a traditional idea, but I like it.
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Megamaniac67

@Archie_leo you know that thing dark star used to absorb Kevin’s mutation? Library something? Ben stops her from stealing it and he has a had a long day and begins ranting and just walks away afterwards. Charmcaster feels guilty now and develops a crush on Ben. (Keep in mind she is not as old as she is in cannon)
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Archie_leo

@Megamaniac67 plot element I have absolutely no idea what this is, but I all in
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Megamaniac67

Added a new extension to the harem, I added some ships at the bottom that I thought of so far. MHA girls I haven’t gone into big detail because they are all in Japan. Check it out and ask for some more suggestions if you’d like. I have a few more relationships that will be in this story by the big conversion of all the groups after I cover classic. Ask for them and I’ll tell you them.
          
          Also for when Kevin gets mutated a second time I think it would be cool if he stole all of AFO’s quirks to make the battle extra hype and not just ultimate Echo echo being used. Like maybe a team up take down?

Archie_leo

@Megamaniac67 I saw the second chapter about the harem don't worry
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Megamaniac67

@Archie_leo Also who do you need info about?
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