Ardeneleanor

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I watched from afar, as pieces of my life slowly walked away, tearing pieces of my heart away from the original owner, and leaving it with a cheating bastard who couldn't tell right from wrong. The couch where he professed his "love" for me and I ate my life away, telling myself it was all  going to be ok. I turned away from the scene before me, to hide the single tear that escaped. Taking a deep breath and letting it go in pieces, I faced my now empty house, braved the silence and went to my computer first thing. I ordered furniture to suit me, and relaxed.
          	
          	What surprised me was that he had the nerve to show up at my house. I opened the door, and said,
          	" What do you want Greg? You took all my stuff hours ago and now you're back? Seriously?"
          	
          	Greg shot me a look and said," look, Eleanor, I really don't give a shit, the house needed to be redecorated anyways. Can you please let me in our house?"
          	
          	" uh, hell no! And by the way, asshole, this is MY house. So you can go find a hotel and sleep there, because there is absolutely no way I am letting your filthy ass in my house." And with that, I slammed the door in his face and went back to my movie, ignoring his threats and banging  on my door. Thank god I took his keys from him. 
          	
          	this is a new story I am working on I will try and put it up soon. Tell me what you think?

Ardeneleanor

this message may be offensive 
I watched from afar, as pieces of my life slowly walked away, tearing pieces of my heart away from the original owner, and leaving it with a cheating bastard who couldn't tell right from wrong. The couch where he professed his "love" for me and I ate my life away, telling myself it was all  going to be ok. I turned away from the scene before me, to hide the single tear that escaped. Taking a deep breath and letting it go in pieces, I faced my now empty house, braved the silence and went to my computer first thing. I ordered furniture to suit me, and relaxed.
          
          What surprised me was that he had the nerve to show up at my house. I opened the door, and said,
          " What do you want Greg? You took all my stuff hours ago and now you're back? Seriously?"
          
          Greg shot me a look and said," look, Eleanor, I really don't give a shit, the house needed to be redecorated anyways. Can you please let me in our house?"
          
          " uh, hell no! And by the way, asshole, this is MY house. So you can go find a hotel and sleep there, because there is absolutely no way I am letting your filthy ass in my house." And with that, I slammed the door in his face and went back to my movie, ignoring his threats and banging  on my door. Thank god I took his keys from him. 
          
          this is a new story I am working on I will try and put it up soon. Tell me what you think?