Ari0726

SNEAK PEEK!!! THIS IS JUST THE FIRST REVISION IT WILL ONLY GET BETTER FROM HERE.
          	
          	Chapter 1: Post Battle
          	
          	There is nothing in all the Three Levels that sounds more enchanting than the thunking of goblets as the banged against each other, and the joyous chatter and laughter of those who have just won a battle. 
          	
          	Though, all those amazing noises were thanks to me. After all, it was me who lead one of the most elite group of angels to victory. My name is Lucille, and I am one of the most powerful warrior and general in all the Three Levels. That is, as far as the angels are concerned. Of course, after my fellow brethren, the Arch Angels. They are one of the strongest group of angels, and Mother's favorite.
          	
          	I was sitting atop a large keg, which contained everlasting ale, at the end of one of the tables. In front of me was my team, who were chattering excitedly and laughing whenever one of them did something clumsy. I would laugh whenever one of my teammates would stretch the truth of their valor from today's battle.
          	
          	
          	THAT WAS JUST A QUICK SNIPPET I HAVE SO MUCH MORE AND YET STILL SO MUCH MORE EDITING TO DO

Ari0726

SNEAK PEEK!!! THIS IS JUST THE FIRST REVISION IT WILL ONLY GET BETTER FROM HERE.
          
          Chapter 1: Post Battle
          
          There is nothing in all the Three Levels that sounds more enchanting than the thunking of goblets as the banged against each other, and the joyous chatter and laughter of those who have just won a battle. 
          
          Though, all those amazing noises were thanks to me. After all, it was me who lead one of the most elite group of angels to victory. My name is Lucille, and I am one of the most powerful warrior and general in all the Three Levels. That is, as far as the angels are concerned. Of course, after my fellow brethren, the Arch Angels. They are one of the strongest group of angels, and Mother's favorite.
          
          I was sitting atop a large keg, which contained everlasting ale, at the end of one of the tables. In front of me was my team, who were chattering excitedly and laughing whenever one of them did something clumsy. I would laugh whenever one of my teammates would stretch the truth of their valor from today's battle.
          
          
          THAT WAS JUST A QUICK SNIPPET I HAVE SO MUCH MORE AND YET STILL SO MUCH MORE EDITING TO DO

Ari0726

I promise you all I will update as soon as I can. I'm so so so sorry for not updating earlier. If you read this I thank you. I'm having a bit of a writer's block for Temptation of the Fallen as of late. I will hopefully get over that soon. The other stories have not been updated due to my busy schedule with band and the fact that I would appreciate sleep from time to time. Thank you all so much for sticking with me through this.
          Hugs and kisses!
          ~Ari

Ari0726

This is more of a rant because it's been a crappy few days.
          Let's start with this. Don't ever EVER lie to me... I'm a pretty understanding person and I won't be mad if you tell me the truth... Also, I know pretty much everyone in this small town so I know what they can be like. If you're going with someone I don't like and I spam you it's because I'm worried.
          Another thing, totally different topic. Don't overwork your students and then yell at them if they don't do so well after TWO HOURS of work. Especially if they have asthma. That's just a jerk move. It's the first two days, I understand we have a parade but don't change things up. It does no good for anyone. In fact it makes things harder.
          Anyway I'll leave it at that. Hugs and kisses!
          
          ~Ari

Ari0726

Hey guys, been a while. So I wanted to thank you guys 330 reads holy crap! I had no idea that I would make it this far. I've decided to just use this instead of an author's note. Those honestly kinda piss me off. Long story. (Pun totally not intended). I hope you guys are enjoying Temptation! I'll update as often as I can. Thank you all so much for your patience and support/ reading. I have many ideas in store.
          
          ~Ari

Ari0726

Alright so, here's how this is gonna work. I can either making Chapter 16 and Chapter 17 two separate chapters and be short OR I could make them one long chapter. Let me know what you guys think and by Friday and I'll have it published most likely sometime Sunday. Thanks for reading!
          
          ~Ari

ANAANKEL1

Protip! (Really...But not really lol): Read a lot, and eat....EATING IS GREAT~

Ari0726

@ANAANKEL1 plus i always have a book in my hand
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Ari0726

@ANAANKEL1 eating is my favorite activity tbh *laughs* 
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