AriaAliaAuthor

Guys im sorry for the long post. But I am going to retire my cirrent wip. Nightmares that Never  Cease. So here's sort of an explanation, also an idea I have because everything has kinda been falling apart around me.
          	Book related: i tried to make it more intense, and didnt end up forming the characters very well. They ended up being very flat and congealed into these bursts of unemotional trash, and overemotional fish. Now, this doesn't mean I dont like what I have written, I really do, I just feel like I need to take some time to rewrite the book, that way it can shine how it is meant to, not how fast I want to write it. So I might dissappear off here for a while. Yes, the story was formed well, but i tried to rush it, and perfect it at the same time, And ended up with no protagonist, no problem, and too much action to truly understand the situation. Im wondering if maybe it wasnt meant to be written until now, because ive been putting off writing it for a while, and each scene has felt more and more forced. So here's my questions for you all, as readers.
          	Third person pov, or 1st person pov?
          	Two povs or one?
          	45 chapters or 50?
          	Badass female main character with trauma, or mean female main character with trauma but shes a bitch?
          	Subtle male character, an empath, and the leader of the soldiers or uncaring guy who only.has a soft spot for her? 
          	Sci fi fantasy romance, or dark romance fantasy?
          	Immediate action, or lead into introductions first? 
          	Same first and last line, bit with different meanings, or different first and last lines, with the same meaning?
          	Should the fmc be a normal fantasy book character like ( i dont know how to fight, but im.needed because of this prophecg) type thing, or (bitches get outta my way, I dont need you to get to the top of mt everest) kinda vibe? 
          	Older fmc or younger fmc (older as in late 20s early 30s) and younger as in 20-25 kinda area.
          	Clean Ya, or spicy Ya? (I have ideas so please let me know)

AriaAliaAuthor

Guys im sorry for the long post. But I am going to retire my cirrent wip. Nightmares that Never  Cease. So here's sort of an explanation, also an idea I have because everything has kinda been falling apart around me.
          Book related: i tried to make it more intense, and didnt end up forming the characters very well. They ended up being very flat and congealed into these bursts of unemotional trash, and overemotional fish. Now, this doesn't mean I dont like what I have written, I really do, I just feel like I need to take some time to rewrite the book, that way it can shine how it is meant to, not how fast I want to write it. So I might dissappear off here for a while. Yes, the story was formed well, but i tried to rush it, and perfect it at the same time, And ended up with no protagonist, no problem, and too much action to truly understand the situation. Im wondering if maybe it wasnt meant to be written until now, because ive been putting off writing it for a while, and each scene has felt more and more forced. So here's my questions for you all, as readers.
          Third person pov, or 1st person pov?
          Two povs or one?
          45 chapters or 50?
          Badass female main character with trauma, or mean female main character with trauma but shes a bitch?
          Subtle male character, an empath, and the leader of the soldiers or uncaring guy who only.has a soft spot for her? 
          Sci fi fantasy romance, or dark romance fantasy?
          Immediate action, or lead into introductions first? 
          Same first and last line, bit with different meanings, or different first and last lines, with the same meaning?
          Should the fmc be a normal fantasy book character like ( i dont know how to fight, but im.needed because of this prophecg) type thing, or (bitches get outta my way, I dont need you to get to the top of mt everest) kinda vibe? 
          Older fmc or younger fmc (older as in late 20s early 30s) and younger as in 20-25 kinda area.
          Clean Ya, or spicy Ya? (I have ideas so please let me know)

lonleysouls_

hello you dont know me very well lol but its kinaddi from the google classroom and i absolutely LOVE your writing!

ItsGracieMae

Hayyyyy it’s Gray from the classroom