@Isabelleisbeauty Looking back, I was pretty immature with my writing style tbvh I wrote whatever came to my mind without any proper structure, and I always struggled with pacing of the story, i tend to rush.Most of my previous works had open endings or no real endings at all. I kept too many plot secrets hidden without ever providing the closure the story needed. While now I try to shift toward a more mature style writing which might seem odd to some of old readers, but I'm committed to improving. I have several plots in my drafts right now, and I'm confident I will do better with time. Thank you for the criticism it will really help me rethink my approach and figure out what I can do differently to improve further. Lysm