I really enjoyed reading your book.
The humor (your humor), within the book is really nice, and it’s actually funny.
Not like cringy, and it didn’t seem like an attempt to “drag” your character.
It just seemed very natural, and that made it even better.
I also really enjoyed the uh, four year gap between Dominic and Raven. I felt like it really added that sort of pizzazz, because as you know “time makes the heart grow fonder”, or something like that.
But within that four year gap, it kind of hurt me because I did actually sort of…really, truly did start to like Drulock and his 58th mate, I don’t remember her name.
My point is with that bit, it was just nice to see another side of the so-called “page”.
And not just the main setting, and the main focus being Raven’s and Dominic’s pack.
Overall I loved this story, and I don’t know if you’re writing and keeping them in the drafts (which I find to be easier), but even if you don’t make that sequel, and just go on to make a new book..../jk
I’m still gonna rock with it, because for that story, “For ‘Beta’ or For Worse”, to be your first story…hunny that was delicioso. Okay .
Delicioso.