@Chesmok
Thank you so much! I'm so excited and very grateful... It was a lot of fun. Am I banned now from entering any more of your contests?
Also, as for a book to critique... I've been writing a book called Whenever Forever Begins. I think you said you were offering critiques on three chapters... So could you skip the prologue and just do the first three chapters? Does that work for you? Anyway, thanks again for everything! It was a pleasure to write for your contest!