@fayesutopia no problem! I really liked the chapters with the mother and how the songs (specifically fairytale) would relate in the moment of reading it. Really touched me. Almost to the point of tears but i aint no bitch. (Just kno my soul cried a lil bit lmao).
I hope you continue to write honey! Its lovely/refreshing to read such a strong and distinct character like Yasmin. Shes not at all too cliche. Its like shes really relatable in a sense. Well before i type u a novel, imma end this here haha! Have a good day!
Hiii AriesLaw!!! Thanks for voting on Awake!! Please be sure to check out my latest novel Weightless and spread the word about my work if you like my writing :)
I'm happy to hear that! I didn't want to make him mean/cold, but I didn't want him to be soft either, lol. I'm going to add a little spice to the next chapter. I think you'll enjoy it!
aww, thank you so much! That means a lot to me. I really try to make the characters real. I struggle a bit with writing the guy POV, but I think I'm getting better :)